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Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by Daichi on Tue Jun 12, 2012 9:06 pm

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Name: Okinaga What is the name of your Bloodline Limit?
Clan Surname: Okinaga Is this from a specific family line like the Uchiha or Hyuga? Does your clan have it's own family surname that extends to those who have the possibility of gaining this bloodline?
Type: Shadow/Darkness and Rintin Pinwheel Eye (Dojutsu)

Kekkai Genkai:
Spoiler:
Name: Kumori
Type: Supplement
Rank:D-S
Chakra Used:20(Increases by 20 each level)
Element:None
Description: The user is allowed the ability to see invisible creatures, track down other shadow demons., AND contact the dead. As the level increases so does the rank. Level one is a D rank, Level two is C Rank, B Rank is level three, Level four is A rank, and level five is S Rank. (Must roleplay learning)(While in this state the user also gains speed)

Kumori Levels:
Level One: The user is only able to see the ghost. The ghost will help you only fifty percent of the time.
Level two: The user is able to talk with the ghosts plus ability of level one. The ghost will help you whenever you ask it to.
Level Three:The user is able to sense the location of other shadow demons and Okinaga clan members. Plus abilities of levels One-Two
Level Four: The user is able to see better in dark places plus ablilities of levels One-Three.
Level Five: The user can see perfectly in the darkest of places. Plus abilities of levels One-Four.

Word Count Requirments:
Level One(200)
Level Two(500)
Level three(700)
Level four(1000)
Level Five(2000)(must role play)

Spoiler:
A step beyond the Kumori is the Rintin pinwheel eye- Description:A Dojutsu just for the Okinaga clan, in reality it is a more advanced stage of Kumori...It is only available in the left eye but there has been cases where it can be developed in both eyes. Its a special eye that makes you have the ability to speak to demons and ghosts and even angels.
It is rare that this new generation of the Okinaga clan members will have it in their eyes...It only rests within the elder members who are all possibly dead.(all are dead in the leaf village.except for Iki Okinaga)
It can be developed though, but in complete darkness and in complete silence and with complete solitude.
You must be one with your self and with the spirits.
There are five levels of the Rintin Pinwheel eye.
but only the first two have been successfully reached.

Level one- it enhances any of the Clan's jutsu and you will be able to see visions of horrible disasters,and also able raise their stats by 30 ;has six unconnected points.

words required 600

Level two- you will be able to speak to angels as well as Demons and your ghosts that you can summon will be doubled tenfold; the six points connect to make three separate groups.raise stats by 35



words required 1200

Level three- You will be able to bind the opponent's soul to their body so if they die their soul will remain there forever,also you will be able to possess
other dead people, somewhat of a last moment drawback and have ghost like abilities;extensive use will make the user drop half their energy.
The three groups connect to make a perfect circle and your pupil makes a star like shape.raise stats by 40
words required 1800

Level four- Everything that you touch becomes decays, and or dies(what I meant here was the opponent is poisoned,just a more advanced version of shadow claw.);
you will have the ability to use the Death style - Soul fire.
Extensive use will destroy your living tissue, and make you lose up to 50 of your health.;
The circle becomes five lines that connect to the pupil.
raise stats by 45.
words required 2400

Level Five- The final level, this level allows you to become almost as a grim reaper, your skin starts to burn off and your skeleton shows, you emit this black flame{sometimes its purple or blue}(truth be told you become ghost rider.)
your ultimate attack is the Black flame pennant stare, you engulf the opponent in this black or blue flame, and this puts them in a special genjutsu called the Reaper tensou room of judgement.
Where the opponent is on this spinning wheel and and or tied in chains....
The user either grows massively large and uses a giant scythe, or they stay small and continuously burns the Opponent.
Drawbacks are when you are in this form you body will be slowly and painfully eating itself untill your heart stops...so if you get out of this transformation you will most definitely cough up blood and or pieces of organs that have been ripped apart.
the user will most likely lose 75% of their health,80% of their chakra, and 90% of their energy plus permanent damage to your insides.
;When in your normal level five, the lines curve and resembles a complete pinwheel...remember all the eyes spin.
raise stats by 50.
words required 3000

In order for you to get this eye you will have to reach all the levels of Kumori.
It is a Okinaga clan jutsu.

Kekkai Genkai Information: Fully describe the kekkai genkai in this section. Explain your ability from top to bottom. Strengths, benefits, weaknesses, drawbacks. Chakra costs, physical appearances, and everything else on top. Be sure to space your information into paragraphs, be polite to staff and don't make us read an unorganized wall of text.

Things that are FORBIDDEN

Spoiler:
Summoning ghosts that own a Kekki genkai is not allowed, Come on we all have to be fair..Okinagas are strong but not unfair...
Summoning Demons and ghosts without any limits
Using the Rintin without any health loss or fatigue.
Copying other Okinaga training, or joining in with Okinaga training without permission.

Required Jutsu to use ghost

Spoiler:
Name: Spiritual Contact (Stage One)

Rank: D

Element: N/A

Damage caused/Heal amount: N/A

Chakra Required: 10 per ghost. (50 ghosts max in total; requires Kumori before training. If rintin pinwheel is achieved, 80 will be maximum.)
Energy Required: 15

Description of jutsu:

This is essentially a jutsu to enable the user to interact with ghosts - while their kumori is activated, of course. Otherwise the ghosts will simply ignore you, though you will be able to see them.
You will not be able to physically interact with a ghost in stage one - only talk and hear it respond. To an Okinaga who has kumori activated, an area heavily laden with ghosts would appear to look like mist covered the area, of course with the occasional figure that has a stronger manifestation than others.

I repeat - in the first stage, you can only talk and hear ghosts up to the maximum mentioned above. This is to allow a member the ability to get something people cannot see or hear a perfect spy. If someone does come in contact with the ghost, it'll feel as though goosebumps and a minor electrical current had simply washed over their body.


These last for 20 posts in total. To train for this, the Okinaga member must make a post of 800 words.

Unique to you or your clan?: Yes


Name: Spiritual Manifestation (Stage Two)

Rank: B

Element: N/A

Damage caused/Heal amount: 5 DMG

Chakra Required: 20 (Maximum of ten ghosts at a time, with 5 more chakra lost everytime a new ghost is summoned.)
Energy Required: 15

Description of jutsu:

This is a more advanced version of the last stage - a mother to other spiritual manifestation jutsu. By prompting ghosts to manifest their spiritual power, they can very briefly come in contact with something from the living world - to pick up a kunai to fling it at someone, or punch a human weakly. It's sheer willpower that is required for this - types of ghosts will be specified in jutsu that branch off from this, weak or strong. Basically, this is a gateway jutsu required for other types, and because of that this starting jutsu is weak at five damage per hit.

But in no way do the spirits possess chakra - once the ghost has died, it cannot have chakra ever again. If an okinaga member has died, it cannot use any jutsu to get back into his or her corpse whatsoever... once you're dead, you're just that. Dead. Nothing more and nothing less.
With each attack, a ghosts ability to manifest itself in your presence will be halfed - once the ghost manifests itself in general, it'll have a physical form of either a floating orb or its former body (like a projection of some sort) for a very brief moment of one post before it goes invisible, for 20 posts. Once it comes in contact with the living, each time it hits the living its manifestation span will be halved. For example.. if the ghost were to FALCON PAAWNCH someone in the face, it would last for 10 more posts. One more hit, and then 5 more posts. One more... and zip - the ghost is useless until an entire thread later.

Because this is a gateway jutsu and so strong when used correctly with other jutsu branching off from this, it won't be useable until a 2000 word training post is offered and accepted.



Unique to you or your clan?: Yes

Shadow Jutsu

Spoiler:
Name: In'eiton: Jikkō hōhō: Tetsu no shojo (Litteral meaning: Shadow Style: Execution Technique: Iron Maiden)

Rank: S

Element: Shadow/Darkness

Damage caused/Heal amount:
100
Chakra Required:65
Energy Required:10

Description of jutsu: The user makes a few handsigns and pushes both hands against the ground, causing a light which parts from the user's shadow to the enemy's, before an Iron Maiden (Basically a coffin with spikes in the back and on the door of it) Appears under the enemy, causing them to fall into it, the spikes in the back of the Iron Maiden impaling them before the user claps his hands together, causing the spike infested door to close violently and quickly on them, causing torrential damage and potentially killing them, the drawback is that the technique cannot be used unless the enemy is standing on something, or very close to something.

Unique to you or your clan?: To clan


Name: Meiton no Yoroi (Darkness Release Armor)
Rank: S

Element: Darkness/Shadow
Damage caused/Heal amount: 20 when touched, deducts 35 % damage from jutsu and boosts synapses and muscular energy, meaning a 35% plus speed and strength augmentation, also causing a 10 plus energy restoration per turn

Chakra Required: 15 per post
Energy Required:0

Description of jutsu: The user concentrates their shadow release energy to make an armor which boosts their power and speed, and lets them regain their energy quickly at the cost of chakra, Mind you, this technique requires 15 seconds to activate, (1 post after current)

Unique to you or your clan?: Unique to clan


Name: Shadow Spike

Rank: C

Element: Shadow

Damage caused/Heal amount: 30 damage
Spike Length: 4 meters
Chakra Required: 20
Energy Required: 2

Description of jutsu: The user can use any shadow of an object and a person in the vicinity and make a spike come out of their shadow to impale them, this is particularly useful in stealth attacks

Unique to you or your clan?: Yes, unique to clan.

Name: Shadow Demon Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank S
Element: Shadow
Chakra used: 125
Distance: Medium
Description: The user goes through a large string of handseals and once complete a large mass of phsyical shadow chakra is sent forth and is covered by wraps hich turn pitch black once the newly formed creature is covered. once the creature has been formed a chakra channeling network is formed in the creature that the user can manipulate to have the demon use jutsus, but at a higher chakra cost than what they would normally take. Also this chakra network allows the user to have the demon enhance it base attacks just as a shinobi would use chakra to enhance his taijutsu. The demon also has a massive strength due to its size, but is also fairly quick due to it being made of chakra.(Increases friends strength and speed by 20 and you can not use on yourself. It only lasts for 10 posts. It will deplete your health by 10 each round.)

Name:Shadow Claw[No handsigns required]
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:B
Chakra:78
Element:Shadow
Description:A claw made of chakra that can extend for 10 meters. It can go in any direction, and its max speed is estimated around 40 MPH. If its claws pierce your skin, it poisons you.

Name:Demon Soul
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:SS
Chakra Used: 150
Element:Shadow
Description: This secret clan technique allows the member of the Okinaga clan to merge with his/ or her own shadow demon. (In order to obtain you must roleplay learning this jutsu as if it were the four tailed bijju.)

Name:Shadow Warp
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Chakra Used:25
Element: Shadow
Description: The user warps underneath the ground. A shadow will appear where the user is located and it appears as though you are swimming under the ground and you jump out aftter a period of time.

Name: Shadow Seal: Decay

Rank: C

Element: Shadow

Damage caused/Heal amount: 30 DMG (5 damage every post.)

Chakra Required: 20
Energy Required:15

Description of jutsu: The user must come in contact with the opponent - and by placing their hands flat on the opponents body, charging shadow chakra they are able to place a seal-like curse on the opponent. Of course, this just looks like a tattoo - and in the center of that tattoo the persons body will slowly begin to decay. After five posts, the decay will stretch out of the seal and then begin to decay the persons body itself.

Another way of initializing this is by getting a zombie to bite another person. The bite won't turn them into a zombie, but their bites tend to make that spot decay at a MUCH faster rate than usual.

Unique to you or your clan?: Yes

Name:Shadow control

Rank: D

Element:darkness

Damage caused/Heal amount:none

Chakra Required:15
Energy Required:none

Description of jutsu: The user takes control of the opponent's shadow,
by flushing their own chakra through the ground and taking their shadow
away to be of use.

Unique to you or your clan?: Yes

Name:Shadow release: Shadow slave formation

Cost:30

Rank: C

Element:shadow/darkness

Damage caused/Heal amount:when attacked it depletes the opponent's Chakra by 5 each time they are hit -25 damage...no heal amount

Chakra Required:20
Energy Required:none

Description of jutsu: When the Opponent's shadow is stolen and controlled..the user will be able to form a copy of the opponent as a line of defense and attack...but there can only be one copy since theres only one shadow if its one on one...More can be made..but more chakra is required.

Unique to you or your clan?: Yes

Clan/Bloodline History:The First Okinaga
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Matsui Okinaga (松井 興長?, 1582 - July 24, 1661) also known as Nagaoka Sado (長岡 佐渡?) was a Japanese samurai who served the Hosokawa clan, during the early Edo period (17th century). It was Nagaoka Sado himself who had protected Miyamoto Musashi as for him to be able to duel against the famous Sasaki Kojiro in 1612. At one time on the battlefield during the year of 1638, Musashi had met Sado. Sado had known at the time that Musashi was living in the house of Ogasawara, but he had learned that it was Musashi's son, Miyamoto Iori who had been under the service of the Ogasawara, and that Musashi was there as a guest. Sado had also learned that Musashi had no true intention of entering under the lord's service, and that he was only taking part in that battle (Ogasawara establishment in northern Kyūshū) as a staff in order to be an advisor to his son. After Sado had then returned to the province of Higo, he began planning the steps to get Musashi into the service of his fief, since he had already known that Lord Hosokawa Tadatoshi was interested in him. However, Tadatoshi had been previously schooled in the wisdom of the feudal system, in which he ordered for Musashi to act prudently, because Musashi's current situation as he had known, was residing within the house of Ogasawara, in relation to the fact that it would be a major mistake to show discourtesy.
Sado started out by first sending a letter to Musashi, because the steps for employment had to be taken very discreetly. Musashi had politely responded saying that he had no intention of having a lord. During the year of 1639, Sado had passed through the region of Kokura --within Kyūshū province-- on his official business. Sado had taken this advantage to visit the house of Musashi's son in order to see Musashi, to whom he had communicated the wish of his lord, as well as his own. After not receiving a true answer, Sado departed, with Musashi later accepting the Hosokawa offer, as a guest, not a vassal. However, near the end of his life, Musashi was formally received as a retainer of Lord Hosokawa. Matsui is originally from the land of Iron, He was known as the most trustworthy samurai at the time..But in another secret life he studied the art of resurrection and practiced with talismans and studying the human body from the inside out figuring out ways to bring back the dead. He figured that using herbs and just plain science was never going to work..So he took the role as a shaman and started to preform nightly rituals in order to contact the spirits,
little did he know that with greatness there is a price...One ritual went wrong then he opened up a crack, 100 Demonic spirits were released and all possessed Matsui totally overflowing him with evil intentions,His soul was no longer his,Matsui stabbed his sword into the site where the crack is sealed, Matsui migrated from Iron country to the newly formed leaf village
where he rose a family which his eldest sons migrated to other villages thus making the Okinaga clan international. Matsui died from an unknown illness and his ghost is still by his sword in the land of Iron.
Explain how your bloodline came to be. Was it over centuries of genetic change? Did a mad scientist perform experiments on your family and your ancestors until he achieved something truly wonderful? Is it simply something you were born with? How did it happen based on where you were or where you're from? Was it the environment, did you adapt or change somehow? Was your evolution more advanced than other people around you? Why are you special, and how did you become special? Everything from the beginning of time to the end of space, show us what your bloodline was, is, and will be.


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Re: Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by September on Tue Jun 12, 2012 10:33 pm

hello imigrant from NRPG, first things first. We don't use stats. Remove all mentions thereof. Use our template for Ninjutsu.

There is a lot more that needs to be addressed, but one step at a time.
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Re: Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by Maelstrom on Tue Jun 12, 2012 10:43 pm

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Re: Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by Daichi on Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:35 am

How do i do power gains?
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Re: Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by Maelstrom on Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:26 am

So basically you summon ghost that can possess people, and hurt people, however only you can see them?
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Re: Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by Daichi on Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:40 am

They dont possess people and Uchiha and Hyuga cans ee it cause they have chakra. When they run out of chakra they fade away...
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Re: Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by Maelstrom on Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:47 am

Daichi wrote:

Kumori Levels:
Level One: The user is only able to see the ghost. The ghost will help you only fifty percent of the time by possesing the opponent but only for one post.

yea.....
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Re: Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by Daichi on Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:55 am

Oohhh....i didn't even see that lol havent looked at this in the longest. Hold up...
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Re: Okinaga Clan(Complete)

Post by Maelstrom on Thu Jun 14, 2012 12:09 pm

No. This is just denied.

1.) Its OP

2.) You pretty much copied and pasted from another site, which nothing is wrong with that.. just the fact that you had no idea what you copied.

3.) Consider this to be very similar to a job application. I have a very extensive list of cannon clans that people can and will be very happy with. So whether you get this clan does not matter to me in the slightest bit. So, with that being said you have to prove to me WHY this clan should be used on the site.

So get rid of all of this. Look over the sites rules and all the system we are working with and recreate it. You will have much more success.
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