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Mcafeej's app

Post by mcafeejffery on Mon Mar 19, 2012 1:32 am

~Character Application~

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~Basic Information~
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Name: Getsu
Gender:Male
Age:26
Village: Formerly Mist

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~Appearance~
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Description:Tall, Toned somewhat muscular build, metallic silver right arm, wears a hood that can completely hide his face in shadow. known for shark like teeth, common amongst the seven swordsman, which is now an abnormality amongst ninjas.
Height:6'4
Weight:215

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~Personality~
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Likes: drawing
Dislikes: kids
Hobbies: surviving

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~Ninja information~
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Rank:jounin
Bloodline/Clan: seven swordsman
Bloodline Element:
1st Element:(genin+water)
2nd Element:(chunin+wind)
3rd Element:(Jounin+earth)

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~Special information~
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Class:Jonin
Equipment: Bio-Weaponry Hydro powered mechanized right arm, sonar kunai, and a sword whose blade can morph into all stages of water. liquid, gas, solid.
Jutsu:Mostly water based jutsu.

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~History~
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History:Descendant from the original Land of Mist's Seven swordsman. He was raised in war time.

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~Rp Sample~
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RP Sample:

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Re: Mcafeej's app

Post by Acaleus on Tue Mar 20, 2012 7:28 am

Is this a WIP? If not, I need more on history and personality. For Jounin, I say at least 4 paragraphs for your persona and 1k for history.


Equipment: Bio-Weaponry Hydro powered mechanized right arm, sonar kunai, and a sword whose blade can morph into all stages of water. liquid, gas, solid.

Sonar kunai? And the first one just sounds way OP. The second one is just downright impossible even with the use of techs. You can't start out with that.
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